November 2008
Jon rounded the corner, the uneven cobblestones of Broad Street bled into Grant. Both the US and a Christmas Flag fluttered above the aging brick of her store front. It was lovingly restored with the help of a good power washer. He knew that because Tessa’s picture after her battle with said power washer was still the wallpaper on his Mac.
The name, Ever After, was in copper, fused with a rich black iron in scrolling letters. The twisting curly cue of the E came into full view as he got closer. A festive wreath donned in pretty white lights butted up against the E, adding tradition to the decidedly eclectic street. More lights twisted and curled around the lettering, finally dripping from the smaller sign that read: books, live music and art.
She’d commissioned a local artist to do the smaller sign and a metal worker for the store moniker. The window displayed a new local artist this week. Rich oils layered over old newspapers stacked over an inch high. That was one way to go green, he thought. Sometimes it was books, sometimes it was art—you never knew what would be in her window.
Ever resourceful and a constant surprise, that was his Tessa.
The rustle of a tree caught his attention over the quiet street. Shops tended to close up early on Sundays, even in SoHo. He looked up, instead of a tree it was another wreath making all the noise. It seemed to float in the air, and then settled to bookend Ever After. The evergreen mirrored its mate down to the amount of lights coiled in and around its bow. A small hand attached to an arm flashed from the corner and he finally noticed the corner of the ladder sticking out.
Déjà vu hit hard. The long, curve of her legs and spectacular ass was on better display than the first time he’d seen her. He couldn’t stop the stupid grin when she tucked the long ribbon of copper hair behind her ear. It was as if those two and a half years hadn’t passed at all.
It was the first day all over again. The punch of attraction, curiosity and that traffic stopping face was about as full circle as he could get. He stepped forward. The only change this time was that he didn’t have to go home alone.
“Hey lady!”
She made a grunt of greeting. “Yeah?”
“The door’s locked.”
“We’re closed, sir.”
He could hear the thinly veiled sarcasm in her voice. It only made him want more of a reaction out of her. “What if I want to buy something?”
She didn’t look down at him. “I’ll be open tomorrow at ten o’clock sharp.”
Brisk efficiency. God, he loved her. “But I want to buy something now.”
“Ten o’clock will have to do.”
“If I told you I was a famous rockstar would you open up for me?”
“Definitely not.”
He saw her lips twitch and sucked back a laugh of his own. “Even if I bought everything in your store, right now?”
“Nope.”
“Even if I told everyone I know what a rude proprietress you are?”
“No one would believe you.”
He tugged on the pleat of her skirt just above her calf. Leather and pears twirled on the wind as she came down a step. “What if I asked really nice?”
He couldn’t see her eyes, but he could see her lips. The way she nibbled on her bottom lip when was a dead giveaway to her teasing. “But, sir, you are not nice.”
He swallowed down the lump of laughter. “I can be.”
Her laugh almost broke free with that answer. “Nope.”
“You won’t open up, even for your husband?”
She stepped down another stair, hooking her arm around his neck. Her mouth hovered just above his. “Especially not my husband. You won’t tell him, will you?”
He slid his fingers into her hair. “Nope.”
“Good.” There was barely a breath between them, and the green of her eyes sparkled just like her favorite season. “I think he might get jealous.”
“Oh really?”
She shrugged. “He’s Italian.”
This time he did laugh and when their mouths met it was just like home.
She was home.
39 comments:
*sniff*
Do you know what this reminded me of? The song was perfect -- it felt like a closing scene for a movie, and then the credits rolling -- and then you walk out of the theatre with this sad, but ridiculously happy grin on your face knowing you've just witnessed something moving, and something that will stay with you for a very long time.
And this story, was no exception.
This was very cute, and I loved how it mirrors the opening scenes of this book, and I'll call it a book. Because it is. Great way to end it, and husband huh? I didn't miss that little subtle drop Miss T. ;)
Gorgeous, one last pears scent - to go ;) You should be proud, and I know you're sad - but know this. You've left behind something incredible.
This is only the beginning.
Thanks, Kiwi.
This is the song that actually got me writing the entire story. I loved this song. It seemed to bring it all together in the end.
Well if it was a book, it was as long as War and freaking Peace! LOL It's 300,000 words. *gasp*
Thanks for all your support through the entire thing.
As for husband.... *whistles*
LOL
You know, my friend, two and a half years and 300,000 words later I love this story even more than that first chapter I read of it. Beautiful story and beautiful ending. I love that you came full circle with it and how very appropriate to end it with a deja vu ending from the very beginning. Beautiful song and beautiful story. Thanks for sharing it with all of us. MUAH
Lmao--- so what's that in movie length? The entire Lord of the Rings trilogy, extended versions?
Your very welcome my dear, I have learnt my greatest strengths off you. So never forget that, and I look forward to crazy Puppy love soon. ;)
Di---Thanks so much babes! You were there from the VEEEEEERY beginning, even before I started posting it publicly. Thank you so much for keeping with it. *muah*
Oh...AND I FINISHED A STORY!! YAY!
i truly love this ending - beautiful - thanx for a wonderful story...
Anon--Thank you very much for reading. I'm glad you liked it.
Again - goofy grin and tears studding my tired eyeballs.
The second I pressed 'play' on the music player, I smiled huge. I LOVE this song (used it in one of my stories, too) and couldn't have picked a better one to end this story. It fits 100% perfectly, and I agree with Kiwi -- I felt like I was watching the final scene in a movie, then walking out with this sad, but peaceful feeling, this renewed sense of faith in love, hope, and the strength to fight for what you believe in.
Because that's what this story is about. And you taught those lessons, whether intentionally or not, through two characters who became so much a part of EVERY 'Home' reader's life that I can guarantee I'm not the only one who will sorely miss them.
You wove a tale filled with every fathomable emotion, every imaginable high and low, every possible test of faith and character that could stretch a person to his/her breaking point...and did it in a way that was not only believable, but gut-wrenchingly REAL. It was never phony, never superficial, never cheesily fairy-tale like, but it certainly was epic.
And aside from the story, the writing itself was phenomenal. You manage to capture feeling and thought in words, something not many writers can do well. You convey love, and pain, and fear, and anger, and hope in such tangible ways that the reader feels them right along with the story characters - they get sucked into the lives and heads of Jon and Tessa to cry and laugh along with them. And THAT is what makes a great story - one where the reader becomes the character on the page.
This was just brilliant, Tara, and you should be damn proud. This is by far the best fan fiction I've ever read, and I truly mean that. I'll never forget the dynamic pair that fought for each other, endured countless wins and losses, overcame trials, troubles, sacrifices and unfathomable heartache, withstood the deepest tests of the heart, and had the audacity to finally find what each of them had been looking for the whole time - a place, and a person, to call home.
it felt like a closing scene for a movie, and then the credits rolling -- and then you walk out of the theater with this sad, but ridiculously happy grin on your face knowing you've just witnessed something moving, and something that will stay with you for a very long time.
And this story, was no exception.
I can't add much more, its perfect.
And I would buy this as a book, you should think about it ;)
And I would go to the premiere of the movie.
and all I can say again is THANK YOU for this wonderful story. I'll miss it, really miss looking at your blog early in the morning before I'm going to work, or late in the evening before I go to bed.
And I have to say thank you again, reading this story improved my English a lot, I couldn't imagine a better practice.
Thank you and now I'm looking forward for a new experience.
Rike
Jaysus, Becks---I don't even know what to say.
Thank you so much for this eloquent response to the story as a whole.
I mean....just WOW.
The end of the story is just that---Home. Everyone wants a piece of it.
Jon and Tessa were dying for it.
Cripes--I can't even come up with a reply that does this justice.
Just my heartfelt thanks.
Thank you for taking the time to put all your thoughts into words.
As a fellow writer, you know just how important feedback is. This kind of feedback is the stuff that makes us want to work harder and deal with the endless bouts of writers block and self doubt. I'm so glad you got the both of them.
xx
Tara
Rike---Ahh girl. I love that I got to meet you in person. And something like this story--to help you learn english, well it's just amazing!
Some days I wish I could bind it---but with copyright issues, that's just something I can't do. The reason why FF is so easily accessible is that we don't make money on it. ;)
Thank you for always being there with a kind word. Hopefully Devotion will keep you just as entertained.
xx
T
Tara, I don't really know what to say......I hate that HOME has ended but love, love the way you ended it. Perfect - full circle and that they both found their HOME in each other.
Like others have said, I am going to miss checking your blog for updates, and I am going to miss these two terribly.
I remember that initially this was a short story that was going to finish before Christmas or New Year 2006! It was a challenge you set yourself to actually finish a story. You did it in style in 169 chapters! Had to get that number in right! LOL
What a long way you have come since then.
I'm glad that it turned into a novel and I am feel honoured to have been there from the very beginning.
I have always loved your work, but I think that this will always be my favourite.
And although I am not a writer myself, even I can see how far you have developed your style. I can see and feel what you write!
Congratulations on achieving the goal of finishing this novel.
I have loved every chapter and every one of the 300,000 words xx
Lynn xx
tara, i can't believe that Home is over but what a way to finish. i know that i've lacked on comments for quite some time now but only because by the time i found the chapter what i wanted to say had already been said. This has been the best story ever and i've enjoyed for the past what 2 years!?! can't belive it's been that long. i am looking forward to reading more of your stories...but they will be hard to top Tessa and Jon.
AJ
Oh my, I can´t believe it´s really really over...
You brought this story Home, just like Jon and Tessa found their home with each other.
I´m so gonna miss them and I hope that, maybe, they´ll show up in short biscuits. I can wish, right?
I´m with all the others, this story is just brillinat and I loved every chapter. God, 300.000 words? You are nuts girl LOL.
Nah, I just have an idea how much work and heartache you´ve put into this story, because I´ve written myself ( and believe me I know how hard it is to actually finish a story, I still have to this with my own LOL, just don´t ask)
I can´t wait for your new projects, oh and, hehe, please don´t roll your eyes at me.
You promised to do a sequel on The Cabin LOL
I haven´t forgotten this little story, and tell you what:
Two weeks ago I´ve read it again in bed, because I couldn´t sleep.
You have no idea what I dreamed this night, damn, sometimes I wish I could record my dreams ;)
If you want to know, you know how to find me ;)it would be much too long to tell here LOL
Nuff said, bows to the FF-Queen with a big Thank You and hopes she´ll come back with something amazing soon.
~ Judith
I echo the sentiments lamenting that it can't be over! It was a fabulous story to follow. Thanks for all the time and effort although it was obviously such a labor of love.
Renee
I can't believe it's over. Tara you're an incredible writer. You have captured these two characters and told their story beautifully from their love of one another to their mosts heartfelt fears, both together and apart.
I will sorely miss Jon and Tessa but you've done an outstanding job writing them.
Thank you for sharing their story with us.
Beth
Thank you so much for sharing your story of Jon and Tessa, I`ve enjoyed every word, and I can`t believe it`s over. Loved it, loved it.
Real life check here:
Tara your writing got me through some bad times, when I started reading it two years ago my father was seriously ill and I used "Home" as a diversion from the pain of real life, when it all became too much to cope with I could hide in another world, and for that I thank you.
I can only add my comments to the others above, you are a truly gifted writer and I look forward to your next story.
What a wonderful story, you are such a talented writer. I'm looking forward to your next endeavor!!
Tara what can I say that hasn't already been said? Not much! Thank you so much for bringing these two characters into my life, I feel like they are old friends and I will miss them dearly.
I'll finish by simply saying that if I ever become half as good an author as you I will die a happy woman! You have a special gift Tara and I feel priviledged to have experienced it.
Emma x
Wow what can I say that hasn't been said?? when I first found this story it was simply the best.. and then i got lucky.. got to know the woman behind the words.. which made me appreciate the story so much more.. I adore you and your way with words.. and this one story... had it all for me..laughter tears tension humor... and a happy ever after.. I am a sucker for the HEA.. you didn't stint on the bad.. you threw it at us with abandon.. yet it made the sweet moments even sweeter.. to preservere against all odds and still win the happy ever after is what makes a good story stellar..
So thank you for sticking to it.. for letting the story play out even if it did take 300000 words or more.. Its what made it Home for so many of us..and heck.. i'll be reading it again.. from start to end.. jsut cuz thats what i do with my faves...
Love ya Tara... can't wait to see what you come upwith next :)
Lynn---One of my girls--right from the beginning, thank you so much for keeping up with the story even with your own stuff going on.
I was talking to my crit partner last night and lamenting on the fact that I know Tessa and this version of Jon sooooooo well, how the freaking hell am I going to do it in my new book. LOL I do know them so well and letting them go is so, so hard.
Sure, sure---throw the short story in there. LOL Yep, short. Ha! Do I even KNOW what that is anymore? LOL
Thank you SO much for commenting, I appreciate it more than you'll know. I hope you come back for Devotion this summer.
AJ--It's okay--I've been the bad author that keeps forgetting to mention the new chapters to you. Life gets in the way! LOL I'm glad you still enjoyed every chapter and cared enough to want and push for new ones. Jon and Tessa will be hard to beat--but damn if I'm not going to try and do it. ;)
Judith--Awww thanks. Not sure on the queen, but I'll take it! LOL It really is hard to finish a story and meandering as the beginning of HOME did--I was afraid I'd never find something that was really interesting to say.
I didn't hit my real stride with the story until the middle. *sigh* such is my life.
Yes--I do intend on working with the Cabin--but Devotion's coming first. I've had that one as a working project since '04. Sweet baby Jesus---such a long time.
And don't think I wont' ask you about Cam. I love her, but I have to figure out a really good suspense story that will do her justice and not turn her into the cardboard cutout suspense story she is right now. Something really meaty.
We'll talk. ;)
Renee--It really was a labor of love. A few times the laptop almost went into...oh, a fire, a window, a pool, the ocean. LOL There were times where I just wanted to stop writing it all together, but it really is you guys---the readers---that keep us going. Thank you so much for commenting.
Beth--Thank you so much for coming on here. I think you have to be my pushiest reader I've EVER known---and I say it lovingly. I need the push sometimes and reminding me that there's people out there reading is always a plus. I'm just glad you'll follow to the next venture.
ANON--Wow...that's just lovely for you to comment about RL--that it helped you in those dark days. I lost my own dad, so I know just where you were. Thanks for sharing that with me. I'm glad I could help in some small way.
You'll see me again soon.
Tina C--Thanks for stopping in. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I hope you like Stephanie and Jamison just as much in July.
Emma--Thank you very much! Writing is a muscle and this muscle I don't mind working at. Show me a gym--meh. LOL I'll go running the OTHER way---a laptop and I just flex my fingers.
Keep on writing, if you love it, it will show in the end product. Believe me. ;)
Tre--Hey there miss Thang--thanks for taking the time to respond. I know you read behind the scenes.
No, I suppose I didn't stint on the bad. Kinda makes the good all the more special when they have to bog through my obstacle course of terrors. ;)
You know that more than most. How we DO love to torture our chars. ;)
Love you too sweetie. Thanks for stopping by and re-reading.
(tho I tend to wince a little at the earlier stuff. LOL)
Whew! I think I covered everyone that responded so far.
*MUAH*
xx
T
Hi Tara - I think I haven't commented so often but I found your story half a year ago and from this time on it was my all day attendent - thank you for this wonderful time. I admire the way you write - I will miss it a lot. I am looking forward to your next project - I hope, there will be another one?
Everything else is already said....wonderful story - complemantary songs - touching - I will miss it so much....
Love it, it has help me through some tough times, I have even read it twice as I don't want it to end. Please say you are starting another one in the not to far future. My life depends on it lol
Dear Tara,
I've been one of your "silent readers" since last Christmas and I've loved this story ever since. I've been checking in day and night to see if there was a new chapter (here in Germany you never know in which time of day you're posting ;)
You have the amazing gift of making characters alive and you make it very easy for us, the readers, to feel with them or even to "be" them.
We laughed with them, we suffered with them and sometimes we could hardly bear the situations you put them in.
I'm really looking forward to reading another story of yours!
Jon and Tessa will be missed dearly..
Wee
When will we know you're writing again? Where should we check? I'm having major withdrawals here. It's indescribable the saddness I feel that this story is over. I'm really not as pathetic as I sound, it's just that this has been my escape for so long after the hubby and kids are asleep and I can have some me time. Thanks, diane4jovi
Tara,
I have to echo everyone's thoughts and the comments of Wee. I too have been a "silent reader" as often my thoughts have been succinctly covered by others - I really can't believe that Home has been part of my reading for so long so it would be wrong for this to end without having taken the time to simply say 'THANK YOU'
Shell
Heike--Thank you so much for taking the time to leave a message. I appreciate it. I'll post a link when I start the new one.
These two meant a lot to me. Let's hope you guys like Stephanie, Jamison, Richie and Jon just as much.
Anon--I'm glad I could help you escape from the rough times with my story. I'll have another one going VERY soon. Escapism is my job. ;)
Wee--Wow, thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed them. I never realized I had so many German readers. LOL Girl, I never knew when I was posting them in EST time. LOL I was all over the map.
I appreciate you taking the time to write to me to let me know how much you loved it. I hope the next one sucks you in just as much.
Shell--Thank you for replying. Comments are always welcome and a simple thank you will always work.
"Well if it was a book, it was as long as War and freaking Peace! LOL It's 300,000 words. *gasp*"
Hey T -
The English translation of War and Peace is over 560,000 words. Does this mean you have to do another epilogue?! ;-)
Put off reading the end as long as I could, but finally gave into the curiosity and finished it. Thoroughly enjoyed every moment...
Thanks!
Jeanine
Tara,
I loved this story. I cried alot towards middle to end. Now have smiles as they found their way back to each other. As a mother who has lost a child and had drifted apart from hubby for the fist year after the loss and her feelings. It took me back and this isn't a bad thing.This was very well written Tara! You should consider possiblity getting it published. Is there a sequel in the works perhaps?
Amy
Just like every 'favourite book' that I have every read, I become so engrossed with the characters I become part of the story.I laugh, cry live and love with them and never want it to end but like everything else all good things must come to an end. Hope you have another story ready for posting real soon.
Thank you Tara for a wonderful story.
Y
Thank you so much for such a beautiful story. I just re-read the last 10 chapters and I am so moved by your words and talent. I truly love the story and the characters. I just dowloaded all the music for the story to put on my Ipod. I hope we get to read something else of yours in the near future. The ending was beautuful. I love how you fit MN into the story.
P.S. I am going to see Matt Nathanson on Suday at SPAC. I love his music.
Bonnie
Jeanine--
Aww...you finally finished it huh?
Girl, if this epic story hit 560K I swear I'd have to shoot myself! LOL!
Of course with the way Devotion is plotting out, it may well be longer than this badboy! LOL Glad you liked it--and glad you stopped by to comment. ;)
Amy--
Wow--thanks so much. I suppose I should be sorry that I made you cry, but that means you really got into her head. That means a lot.
I'm sorry there was a correlation tho.
Thank you--The MS is a bit of a mess to try to make it into a book, but I am working on a few other projects that are heading for a slush pile. LOL Gotta love trying to do the publishing thing!
No sequel, but I do have another Jovi Story in the works.
Y-
Thank you very much for commenting. All the big emotions are there, so I did my job. I really love that job sometimes. ;)
New story very soon. VERY different than this one.
Bonnie-- Guess you should be looking for me on Sunday! LOL I'll be there to see MN as well. I'm in 11th row. ;)
Thanks for the lovely compliment. I'm glad you liked the music too. God, I just love every part of the soundtrack to this story. MN became my unofficial background storyteller.
Just wanted to drop you a line and tell you what a bloody fantastic fic this has been. It's got me through the struggles of exams, and snowed in (yes, even in England! haha) Thank you so much, and I'm glad I got to read it all in one go. I don't think, somehow, that I could have lasted for two and half years!
Muchos love, Hannah
Tara,
For the Heart Of Jovi girl, you have me in tears right now...Yes, you got the reader! This story was amazing, the spiral emotions, love, fear and what love can be.. the visual settings, the tone and vibe of the story. This story moved me so much that it kind of wants to make me find Chapters in the phone book..lol..All I can say is WOW and Thank You so much for writing...I will definitely read this story again...It's a Jovi thing isn't it?
I know I just posted the other day, but,on the way to pick up my friend at the airport tonight, I heard a song from Bad Company called Waiting On Love...It brought me back Home...
Here is the link:
http://listen.grooveshark.com/#/s/Waiting+On+Love/wtPDG
Wow...what a great song! It's perfect for the end of the story--thanks so much for reading, and caring enough to come back and post a song. Music was so very important to this story.
I really appreciate it.
Tara,
I just wanted to say THANK YOU for such a wonderful story. I'm a long time JBJ fan but am new to the JBJ fiction world...but this story quickly had me hooked & I read thru the entire thing in about 4 days...stopping only for work & a little bit of sleep (and let me tell you, it was hard letting go for even long enough to sleep.
You definitely made the characters come to life. So thank you!
Genie P
I loved this story!
I'm reading FF lately and I'm amazed at all of you writers.
How you make us feel everything, just like we were there experiencing it all.
I loved the "happy ending", I'm a romantic.
I also liked the way you described the sex scenes, you know, not too "dirty" but with all the intensity.
As others have said, I also thank you for improving my English as I've learnt new words and it was easy to read for me.
So thank you for writing this lovely story and sharing it with all of us!
So I have no idea if you still get notifications for comments on this story but just in case you do... I found this two days ago and spent the whole day reading the first 90 chapters, continued with another 40 yesterday and finally finished today.
I've very picky with my fanfiction, I think being spoiled with The Layover as your first read will do that to a girl, and I usually give most stories about 10 chapters before I give up. Not this though. This is an amazing story and I'm so glad I managed to found it so many years after it was first written. It's truly lovely and I'm not surprised at all to see that you are writing "real" fiction now. I love the way you write and believe me, the first thing I'm doing now is looking up what else you've written. You really have a gift for writing. Thank you for sharing it.
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